Thread:Thomaswdyoung/@comment-31434354-20170418044229/@comment-31465078-20170422210427

It's all good. I was worried that I'd upset you - which I hope isn't the case (and if it is, I apologise).

In terms of organisation, my preference would be to put them in IRL chronological order. It has the virtue of being unambiguous. It also reflects Ivan's narrative choice - he chose to reveal what he has in that order.

Grouping them by who they happened to would be reasonable, but the fact that they can involve more than one person (e.g. Hal and Hope) potentially makes this problematic, at least if the groups aren't consistent (e.g. if Hal and Hope have separate eureka moments in future). I think it certainly would make sense to link a character's eureka moments from their page, which is one way of preserving this grouping.

I think in-universe chronological order is difficult to establish unambiguously. It's clear that Santiago's moments are in order, and probably Jade's occurs last. But other than that, I don't think there's a clear order.

Grouping by "scenes" again seems potentially problematic or arbitrary, especially if future plot threads interleave or diverge.